The Overflowing Bra

This is a re-release of an old story, with a new ending. I always felt like I probably could have done something better with the ending to the only story I have ever written. At the time, I was just ready to be done. Now I had a little spare time, and returned to it. The ending is different now, with a bit more growth sequences. Hopefully someone will enjoy it. Any feedback is appreciated. It's also posted on my deviantart page if commenting there is easier.

This is a updated version of my recent story, hopefully a bit easier to read. I headed advice on paragraph structure, and I did also change a few minor details upon re-reading it myself. I would like to thank everyone for all of the feedback. I am humbled by how well it has been received, warts and all. I'm sure it's still got some issues, but as they say, nobody is perfect. Wish there was a way to respond to you all here, but I have started posting it in sections over on DA. If anyone cares to swing by and offer their thoughts there, I could answer questions etc.

After a car crash results in a head injury, Jenny finds herself mysteriously wasting away, until doctors find a "cure". This cure comes with a few side effects though. This is my first BE story, or story of any kind. I have been thinking about doing this for years, but only actually started a few weeks ago on a whim, and it sort of took on a life of it's own. It is over 56,000 words, and takes a while to get moving, so I won't blame anyone for skipping the boring parts. The story focuses on somewhat realistic growth, at least by the standards of the genre, as I have just never been able to embrace magic etc. I was inspired by many classics, but notable influences include "Addicted" and "Volunteers" by Mr B., "Positive Feedback" by Athiop, "Correspondence" and "The Offseason Nudist" by Oxomox and/or Tex T, "Janet's Milk" by Anonymous, and the story that got me into the genre, "My Best Friend Julie" by Byrne. Any and all feedback is welcome, and I'm sure my punctuation and grammar needs a lot of work. I just hope at least one person enjoys this. :)

After a horrific car crash, Jenny finds herself mysteriously wasting away, until doctors find a "cure". This cure comes with a few side effects though. This is my first BE story, or story of any kind. I have been thinking about doing this for years, but only actually started a few weeks ago on a whim, and it sort of took on a life of it's own. It is over 56,000 words, and the real action happens towards the end so I won't blame anyone for skipping the boring parts. The story focuses on somewhat realistic growth, at least by the standards of the genre, as I have just never been able to embrace magic etc. I was inspired by many classics, but notable influences include Addicted and Volunteers by Mr B., Positive Feedback by Athiop, Correspondence and The Offseason Nudist by Oxomox and/or Tex T, Janet's Milk by Anonymous, and the story that got me into the genre, My Best Friend Julie by Byrne. Any and all feedback is welcome, and I'm sure my punctuation needs a lot of work. I just hope at least one person enjoys this. :)