The Overflowing Bra

Same story, just gone through and polished up, CLIFFHANGER GONE! Plus a little somethin extra at the end. Some "script" was left, i liked how it read, but most is gone, body proportions, check, i think. . . overall i am fairly pleased with it, although it doesnt have as much BE as i would like, and it still might not flow as well as it could. Hate it or Love it, let me know what you think.

This is my very first story i have ever "published". i have written several, but only for my own use. Depending on how well it is liked, i may post more. If you have any critiques i am all ears. I know it ends rather abrubtly, i am trying to think of a fitting ending thanks to all who took the time to read it. just enough plot development for it to be readable. Relies heavily on the imagination, not for the lactose-intolerant.