The Overflowing Bra

hay great story. iv been thinking up a lot of stories like this one. would love to chat and shoot some ideas by you. email or im me at "rustydiode@hotmail.com"

To put in my two cents in I would going with a organic compound that they they put in the premilking wash and lotion that make there boobs super huge. Still organic just giving the girls a boost a huge boost. But what I would like to see in the end would be the girls growing so huge that they can't see over them and can't even move just living milk tanks.

Yeah, doin good. Keep going. You've got some good plot points to go off of here. It seems like the milk farm might be not as "organic" as they claim, leading to some unexpected mutations? Or perhaps Sarah starts getting a double dose after becoming addicted to her own milk. Maybe she starts to fall behind on her quota cause she keeps drinking all her own milk. Lots of good possibilities 

The story interests me. It is good. You asked for comments: At the beg. it almost seemed as though it wa going to be a script, then it changed. Either way would have been good, but choose. I did notice just a few typos, that can be easily cleaned up with a spell checker. 
My thoughts for an ending? CEO could prove to be a mad scientist. Or some handsome prince takes them away...or they are lesbians etc. 

A great start - keep going. More plot and character will help!

pretty nice, not as much BE as i'd like to but still good story, would love to see more

i like the concept, but the story has no flow and is very hard to get sucked into the world you are trying to portray, also you need to not over look little things like proportion, i would rather have a almost incomprehensible story than one that does not have the physical proportion in order, a woman who is 125lbs and is 6 feet is not something i would want to dream about for she would be so skinny, she would be on the border line of death  

Great Job! I thoroughly enjoyed it--especially given that it's a first endeavor!
You might consider skipping over the script set-up. I think a standard dialogue lends itself better to readability. 
Keep it up!

Well this shows real promise. You might give a more thorough description of their breasts though. I mean, size, shape, and how they little by little change. And of cause the pleasure they feel when being milked, Will it increase with their size and sensitivity?. 
Further on, i feel a little cheated,lol. That was some cliffhanger you gave us there, right when things started to happen. What will happen when they drink their own milk, and is their Dairy really as organic as it claims? will one or more of them develop virginal hypertrophy? And what about relationships between the girls, or boys from outside? The posibilities are endless. 
One thing though, remember there is a world outside the milkfarm, and unless the girls are prisoners on the farm, they wil interact with it. How are Dairy Farm workers viewed in society?
Nevertheless, this was despite it being unfinished, one of the better new stories on this site for quite a while. It is a blessing to get a breake from barely readable rubish from people with an english understanding less than a third grader. 
Thank you for a good read. 

Script-style isn't my fav, seems unfinished. Good writing style, shows promise.