A woman spends an evening chatting with a friend, unaware that he is experimenting with a "new program" that he recently found. This story involves the 'Master PC' reality-altering computer program that was created in JR Parz's original 'Master PC' story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
pornstudent
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very sexy and very creative - the latter is in short supply on some of the stories posted here unfortunately. I thought the ending was cute as well.
Good work! Especially with the character! With a submissive taking the center stage in this kind of work it is easy to fall into the wrong end of self-serving insanity that is appealing to no one, but this was thoughtful and realistic and made me feel like I knew Sapphire, which made her infinitely more sexy as a result.
Chris Yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
When ever I see a full range of transformations, I get excited. This story was very well written and easy to relate to. The sex was amazing tho short lived. Thats not a complaint. This story get my aproval :) very creative ending
ac
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Because of the 'retroactive' nature of the changes, we didn't get a sense of actual change often, which was a little disappointing, but I otherwise enjoyed it.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I liked it, though with the sheer volume of changes it is a bit hard to follow. This one is pretty heavy on anthro for those against that kind of thing but personally I find it all pretty kinky now.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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