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The Overflowing Bra

SapphireBlueHearts
Fullfillment (Chapter 5)
Lucy experiences her first day back at work since her expansion, but how will she adjust to working with her new milk-swollen breasts?
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anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

excellent. Was hoping vincent wouldn't turn out to be such a creep, but w/e. Still hawt.

deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good overall. My only (small) gripe is that I wish the rate of expansion was a bit slower after she drank the milk so it could be paced over a day or so.

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great stuff. Exciting descriptions of the urgency and the expansion. Looking forward to more :)

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