The Overflowing Bra

really like please more 

please write more to this story don't pay any attention to the morons that bad mouth this story its great I'm looking forward for the next  installment of this story please add more  

You've unfortunately tried to take a fanfic shortcut. Since you are using characters from an established work, you assume everyone already knows who they are and what they're like. You don't bother with sufficient description of them. That makes the story quite impenetrable to anyone who didn't already know the base work.
On top of that, your writing itself just needs a lot more work. Your grammar and sentence structure are poor.

Not truly appropriate for this site, but even if it were more BE focused you'd go 1000x further with your efforts by creating your own characters and world instead of tagging onto an anime.

The latest chapter honestly feels like a cheap attempt to extend the story. It adds little to the overall enjoyment of the story, and the one scene that could have added some payoff is fairly short and unexciting. I was honestly disappointed after waiting this long for what I expected to be the beginning of a build towards the end. Instead, we get the previous four chapters condensed into an unnecessary summary from another point of view.

This looks like a fanfic based off of a work I am not familiar with.  The story also lacks BE.  There is brief mention at the end of chapter 4 that the female character can BE when lying, but there is no actual BE.  It is primarily a PE story.