The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Djoser aka Hattushilish
Nutty Nut
Nut thought she wanted a nose job. But something snapped inside her when she saw a woman sporting some giant breast implants. Her obsession was awaken. Now she wants to be the bustiest ever and nothing will stop her. (Implant story if you don't like then don't watch)
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

LOVED IT!!! 5 stars

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good quality writing. I do like the indepth knowledge of current events in Thailand that gave the story more depth. I thought Nut, as written in the story, was likable.
My only suggestion is that more descriptions were devoted to the growing boobs, and the rivalry with Treng.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I enjoyed it. There are places where the writing could be polished up, but nothing too bad. I look forward to the next part.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

a very fun story, a little sketchy on plot in some places but only in the boring spots, so I guess that's OK. I'm intrigued by how much longer she will continue to remain mobile and how much longer her doctor can hide his obsession with her enormous boobs from Nut, because it's becoming clear that there is more than a professional interest there - or perhaps I'm reading too much between the lines hey ho!.

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