I realized 2 things: the authors name was wrong and the description was extremely lame. This is a story i wanted to keep as real as possible. Expect the use of pink concations to increase the bustline of an already epic proportioned main female char and her 'nemesis' which is desperate to stay bigger. Still no sex applies.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.67
ddvz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing! So realistic and wonderfully written. Please continue! And if he could start measuring Isabelle too when he gives her the pills... that... that would be really totally great.
Dhert
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great, but where's the ending? There's not even a cliffhanger to leave us guessing until the next part.
Requiem
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Exceptionally good! I hope there will be continue.
monkey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked it. Hope the next one has a bit more... action.
K
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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