Well the first story i complete. It's so different from what i originally intended it to be :/.
Katt is the Lone Wnaderer of some Fallout fan. She always tries to help those in need. But this time her unintentional help would extend well beyond the wasteland.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Skumar
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed the story. Just long enough to enjoy, but not so long I got bored & stopped reading. I guess it was kind of predictable...
IMHO you ned to develop who Katt WAS & how she was caught. I look forward to your next story in english.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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