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Ashanta features Gerda in a sex show to highlight the arrival of a visiting princess. Along the way, she learns a secret that could prove very useful to her.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 5.00
The Doob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
If it's not apparent by the stream of prior comments to mine own, you are doing an excellent job of both storytelling, plot and character development, and all-around writing as well as crafting a subpurb piece of erotica for the genre. I have only one comment: Your characters seem to want to remain 1-dimensional. You started breaking away from that pattern with the queen near the end.. but all in all, they all seem to define and reinforce their own stereotypes in terms of reaction and behaviour.. still, it's a minor complaint for a great series. I look forward to more!
BoobViking
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I think the Nyarls are awesome. I hope we see more of them. nudge nudge wink wink :) with the uhh... condition Gerda has. wink wink nudge nudge ;)
konser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like all 3 stories and I can't wait for the 4 episode. I would like multiples ends, one classic with Billy, one with the queen, one with the giant cats and all others important characters that she will meet. Does Gerda power will improve in the future?
myobpolo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
And here I am disappointed that we're leaving the Queen. I wish we'd stick someplace long enough to see what effects prolonged (1 year +) consumption of milk will produce.
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Kisame17 speaks the truth. I almost stopped reading five minutes after learning about what she is.
Kisame17
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Please tell me this is the end of the queen. I can't bear to see that tranny whore anymore.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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