Jade’s first day at school plus a sleepover at Mary’s house leads to all sorts of fun.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.43
- BE: 4.86
- Characters: 4.57
- Technical: 4.00
jaked122
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I was very diffucult for me to follow the story
ARCHER
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
gREAT STORY kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. i WOULD LIKE TO SEE JADE DO SOMETHING FOR HER MOTHER.
DHOOSE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have only one quirk about these stories: There are so many characters now, you need to include a character bio for the reader to look up. Maybe even include a list of the scenes the char has been in.
TD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Totally agree with other before me. Awsome story, and what is best, it only passed one week since James got his powers... Keep writing! :)
Otomo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Hell, this was good. And by good I mean utterly awesomely fantastic!
I've really liked your work since the earliest entries on this site and they keep getting better each time. And this one tops them all! The ending transformations are the hottest thing I've read in a long-long time, maybe ever. Sex nagas and mantaurs... Fucking Epic! If only the descriptions of events were a bit longer maybe.. but I shouldn't really gripe with a story being so damn near perfect as this. Thank you and keep on writing!
Myobpolo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Love the stories you tell. The kinky TFs you write about are really enjoyable. Your grammar has improved greatly since your early work. Still there is room for improvement. Keep writing!
renoxyz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love extreme Tfs. I've really enjoyed all of your stories going back to the Dobbson series. If I may make a request, If Jade can really do anything, how about her or another character try stretching / elasticity, I know it sounds crazy, but what the hell. No wildier than anything else in this series. Thanks for the stories.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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