The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Power 5 & 6
The first day of Jade’s new life and she is stuck at home for the whole weekend.  Whatever will she do?
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Oh when will the nest stories be?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Keep on writing more. You're getting better each time

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

The writing style is very open, and doesn't get in the way of the story. Some really very tiny mechanical errors, almost not worth mentioning.

This story really didn't seem interesting to me at first, because it was from a male point of view and had some bizarre transformations that I didn't really have any interest in. But now it's taken off pretty well, settled into a groove, and is quite enjoyable.

It's just too bad that there isn't any buoyant gaseous breast inflation in this story, but then that's just my personal favorite, and not a reflection on the story at all. :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Eagerly waiting next chapters!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good Stuff

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Yeah! Other chapters!

That was a great read! Please continue!

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