The first day of Jade’s new life and she is stuck at home for the whole weekend. Whatever will she do?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.83
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.50
DHOOSE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oh when will the nest stories be?
myobpolo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Keep on writing more. You're getting better each time
HeliumGirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The writing style is very open, and doesn't get in the way of the story. Some really very tiny mechanical errors, almost not worth mentioning.
This story really didn't seem interesting to me at first, because it was from a male point of view and had some bizarre transformations that I didn't really have any interest in. But now it's taken off pretty well, settled into a groove, and is quite enjoyable.
It's just too bad that there isn't any buoyant gaseous breast inflation in this story, but then that's just my personal favorite, and not a reflection on the story at all. :)
TD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Eagerly waiting next chapters!
DH00SE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
pickle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Yeah! Other chapters!
That was a great read! Please continue!
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