skeetskeetbe@yahoo.com
Read all the feedback and completely redid the ending of the original story so that it wasn't disappointing. Over 9 pages of new ending material with some additional features (see new story codes).
New description:
Three Seniors go on a Spring Break trip to celebrate their impending graduation. While on the island, they acquire ecstasy which, when coupled with a native potion, leads to some out-of-control growth. How will they deal with their new proportions? By setting up a fantasy webcam service where the fun can continue.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.33
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story was a lot of fun. Spring Break is a great platform for many a BE story.
The goat
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed the final scene
The Fedora
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Bravo, look forward to your future work. Maybe even a continuation.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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