The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Scene: Closet Expansion
A Short scene involving a Girl whos boobs grow for no told reason. She spends the night having fun with herself. A BE scene for lactation fans. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I thought this was a very nice story in fact I would definitly enjoy hhaveing more like these perhaps longer ones.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Pretty good. "Expand" on the idea some more and you'll really have something!

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

really needs work there is almost no plot no real plot just a litle growth and lactation. work on it. mabey better description and a reason behind the growth

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

A decent short story, although a little too short.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

Very short, but with good imagery. Writing style flits between ambiguous and over descriptive. Work on consistency. All in all, a great start.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Nice story, keep working on these ideas.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Enjoyable, especially the lactation element.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Need to be a bit longer, but the description and overall grammer is good.

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