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The final chapter and conclusion to this story. Dan struggles back to consciousness only to find...he's chained up. Downloaded story into two formats... Enjoy
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.11
- BE: 4.11
- Characters: 4.22
- Technical: 4.33
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cool idea. The stuff that goes on in BE stories would be world changing if it happened in the real world. It was a little short, and even thought the focus was on the characters, I would of liked to see more BE. After all, there were several dozen men there!
Leviathan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is a great story, one of the best BE stories ever written. I know that's a high claim, but I think it is true. My favorite parts of the story was where Robin torments Dan and smothers him with her breasts. I also liked the scene where Robin is rubbing her breasts without thinking about it, and the part where Freya has a talk with Robin and she gets mad. Those are all great and classic scenes. Just awesome. :)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It was a good story and two formats was nice - although that HTML needs a bit of work, the indented speech, eugh.
I think this was a classic fem-dom story but while it did a lot - I couldn't help but feel that it was something of an aside to the first chapter and I would certainly hope that you don't waste this story universe - although a direct sequel wouldn't be the obvious thing to do.
I suppose I just felt that really, it was a bit short and that things which you hinted at could have been elaborated on - but otherwise an enjoyable effort and the best story for months.
Kanodin
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
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Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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