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Darkiel and Suna are here to destroy all humanity by decree of Lord Asmodius, except for a few small problems. No the least of which is the the jaded residents of the Big City could care less. That and a few earthly distractions seem to be getting the better of them...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.40
- BE: 2.60
- Characters: 3.20
- Technical: 3.60
DS
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Bizarre spelling and grammar errors mire what could otherwise have been a nice little story. It reads almost as if it were written by someone who is actually quite good at speaking English, but had no idea how it is written.
MrHHH
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Some sort of pregnancy demon story with one whole sentence of BE.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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