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The Overflowing Bra

Blake Isaac Gordon
Prisoner of thy own Accord part I
This is a story about a nice young man and a not so sane woman. Dan came back from the Peace Corp a changed man... Robin enjoys his incredible stamina and skill. Yet when she wants to please in an oral way how can he refuse. But he does. What's Dan's terrible secret and once Robin knows will she be able to let go. 
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The female character in this story is very interesting. I can hardly wait for the second chapter!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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