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The Overflowing Bra

Neb the Destroyer
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Faeophobia: The_Babysitter
   Gavin's parents are leaving for a week, and he's upset that they've given him a babysitter, but his overseer for the week is from Madison University... Soon, the sexually-frustrated teen will have his hands full with expanding, ballooning, milk-spurting boobs! No wonder this babysitter came so highly recommended.
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rijin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

ilike the writing style and the content is excelent its a bit shorter then i would have liked but it only makes me want more to have it completed oh and i love how u actually know a lil bit about the fae good show

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

All it really lacked was more of what it already had; more detailed breast descriptions, and a longer sex-scene.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author. woho!

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story that fits in well with the whole Faeophobia series, with decent characters and good attention to detail but it really needs to be finished.

Anonymous(of course)
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good story, it just needs to be finished. The ending was leaving you for alot more...

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