The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
Faeophobia: 'Make-Out spot'
    A blind date becomes a magical fiasco of breast expansion and uncontrollable lactation. What secret does the busty, pregnant college co-ed conceal? Why do breasts mysteriously explode in size when she's around? Only those who download this story will experience the lusty powers she possesses.
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Hargle
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

As always, your grammar was superb. I looked at this story, thinking it was the first faeophobia story, but I might have been wrong. While this appears to be the earliest fae story you have on this site, it doesn't actually start at when the fae first emerge onto earth. I would appreciate it if you could direct me to the first story, or if there isn't a story that goes into the details of the fae crossing over to earth, if you could possibly make one.

billoon29
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

no comment, but GOOD :)

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

A humourous story that fits in well with the Faophobia series; I personally quite enjoyed it. Maybe a sequel?

rtpoe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great series! I love them all!

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