The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
Tit for Tat
Cecilia is alone on a hiking trip, and is attacked by a mysterious assailant! As her breasts swell with milk, and her belly expands, she must ask herself if she's been impregnated by an alien.
Average Scores:

Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Second reading! Still excellent!
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great short story! My dick and I thank you.

Viddaric
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I am very much hoping for a sequel. Well done.

eekee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my top faves ^^

Cheese
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Excellent work! Could have done a -tiny- bit more with the ability to self-change, but I'm not one to complain!

trinity
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Perfection. Absolute perfection.

LostInCleavage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I love multi-breast and Lactation. The mystery and description is aso well maintained through out. Also, this is the first story I think I've ready where the pregnancy was appealing.

Festundtreue
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of your best.

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