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Plans to cheat at a high school women's basketball game go wrong in breast possible way!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Tailsko
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
All in all a great story, very enjoyable. The only thing I found lacking was the skips in time seemed to cover up some of the more interesting parts. A bit more detail and shorter overall time jumps would bring it up that extra little notch. But, a wonderful story, and an example of what makes a wonderful BE piece.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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