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The Overflowing Bra

THE BOOBMAN
The Magic Deodorant
a story about a magic roll-on deodorant that has the power to make breasts grow in sexy ways

how will the events turn out? there is a mystery but... what is the meaning of the mystery? 
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unimportant
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This answers the Can anyone post anything? question.
Ty
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Very rough. I can sense the intent hence not all zeroes
Your Mom
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The fuck is this shit. Go back to school.
Neek
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This was... most probably just someone putting a basic premise into an AI and pressing randomize a few times.
huh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
There's actually a story in there, it's just not in the main file.
Bob
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
i think you had an error it stopped at like 3 words
IHHB
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Go back to school kid, you don't belong here.
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