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The Curse of St. George
A bored tourist and an equally bored girl named Isobel accidentally find a necklace hidden away that is cursed to transform the wearer. Isobel must resist the curse or risk becoming a dragon herself- but the curse first targets a part of her body that she does happen to wish was bigger...
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Saw you on DA before I saw you on here, and I still think this is probably your best story yet!
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