The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

BB47
belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
The Man In The High Backed Computer Chair
One day he discovers he has a special ability.
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 BB47
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Hi, this is BB47, and this is not my story.
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
awful
 deuxanges
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
I found this story difficult to follow. The strange fonts did not help.
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
This is not a new story, it's not good, and it's not by BB47. Please stop uploading these.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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