Lillian makes a deal with the devil, giving up her immortal soul to become more wealth, powerful, and beautiful. However, he grants her wish in his own way, only allowing her to improve with every climax she induces in others. Once she realizes this, Lillian takes full advantage of her newfound ability.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 5.00
Alt
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A slow burner with very believable and well written characters. Good writer
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This was okay, appreciated the lack of supergirl stuff. Could've used more focus on BE and a less abrupt ending though.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fun start. I'd like an unexpected twist.
Like perhaps the men she gets her gifts during also get the male equivalent so, for example, the guy she got the boobs with gets a great upper body, etc.
Or maybe her curse of the other guy makes him unable to cum but he's a fantastic, giving, lover who stays hard and he really enjoys giving endless orgasms to his girlfriends. Etc.
No draining or whatever. Too predictable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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