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The Overflowing Bra

Yuri 5 - The Masterpiece
Your wife brings home a revelatory and enchanting work of art that is hypnotic in its beauty. 

This is a TG heavy story written in 2nd person perspective as a forewarning if that isn't your thing. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Very solid story and hit some buttons that I haven't really had an author explore since Ed Miller.

The 2nd person was done shockingly well, especially as an experiment. The change was very well done and had a fairly solid hypnotic loop. It wouldn't take much for a real induction off that. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Overall this was a really fun story. I'm glad to see another story from Yuri's store.

There were a few typos throughout that might have benefited from a onceover from an editor, but again it was a great story.

Also someone's been posting your stories on Deviantart, but they're using a different name. Is that you?
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