The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Perfect Body
When Matt partners up with the most beautiful girl in school for their senior project, he has no idea that he's about to develop a formula to make her even hotter...
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Im sorry that you dont think my stories are appropriate for this site, Mentha. I just read your comments and now realize that my style of story is not welcome here. I will not post here again. HikerAngel
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanks for posting your work here
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
So this is the like, sixth or seventh story you've posted here with no real focus on breast expansion, and I'm getting pretty tired of seeing that.
In this story, there were five paragraphs about the face and only a handful of sentences describing her enlarged bosom and none of which established much except that our male lead, whom was already ready to blow looking at her damn cheekbones, thought was huge.
I'm not dissing a story focusing on another fetish being posted here, but this isn't a story with even the slightest effort put into the breast expansion, being posted on a breast expansion story site.  I don't come here to read about how much nicer the ladies nose gets, I'm here for breast expansion, and if it's both off stage and vague, I'm not gonna be super enthused. And that's exactly what happened here. A handful of sentences saying the tiddy got bigger, and they're fantastic, now I'm gonna move on to how nice her belly button or something looks.
These are not breast expansion stories, they are beautification, superhero origin, and goddess ascension stories. Judging by the advert for your sites, including an amazon page, being linked at the end, these stories arr being posted here to attempt to attract nore attention to your other stories, which isn't necessarily bad, but you're not even attempting to post stories that focus on the fetish this site was specifically made to archive stories catering to, and I am so tired of seeing them here getting all fives across the board by a single reviewer, who also included a five in breast expansion. I'm glad they're enjoying the story, but this is not a story that has earned a five in breast expansion. I have not seen a story from you that warrants a four even. They just do not have a significant amount of detail talking about breast expansion.
I'm not even asking you to stop posting stories here, just for them to have some amount of content that actually focuses on the breasts actually goshdarned growing! I do hope your niche fetish stories finds their audience, because these certainly aren't badly written, but this is just not the place for them!
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome start, just wish we were there for the transformation. Hopefully the next chapters will give us more. 
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