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Dan offers to let his girlfriend Victoria and her sister move in during the lockdown of 2020.
Victoria's sister Angie is a lot curvier, and she claims that women in their family tend to put on weight in all the right places.
Dan soon enjoys watching the inevitable weight gain that comes from quarantine, but the temptation of his girlfriend's sister makes it hard.
30 photos mixed in with the story to add visuals.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.80
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This was all right, I do agree with Kanodin in that some of the character decisions were a bit offputting, but it was still a good read.
Kanodin
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
I'm a polyamorous female, and I found the deception and how it was handled by the characters to be a huge turnoff. I couldn't finish because it lost verisimilitude for me.
joe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
All time favorite author back again!
Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Your past stories have been my all time favorite of the genre for years, I was so freaking excited to see you had posted again. Story and characters were wonderfully dynamic, kink was realistic in how it developed. Loved the modern references like their show preferences, and the fact it took place across 2020 as a setting.
Well Done
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very interesting story, I felt like there was more of a focus on the relationship with Angie, and it sort of distracted from the overall BE factor. Still you're a great writer and I'm glad you're posting again.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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