The Overflowing Bra

great story i loved new formula but i wonder more filled room with parts of girls boobs, legs, etc like Alice in wonderland but more sexy and hot.

I enjoyed the work well enough. We need more writers of your quality, even if the actual content was a bit stale in places

I liked it a lot.

This story left me a bit cold, I have to admit, and largely because of a neither fish nor fowl effect, as it's too long and too plotted to be a simple stroke storu, but the plot is itself still mostly in a strokestory level of believability, which renders things somewhat dissonant. The clothesbursting in extended detail is a fetish aspect, yes, but the plot involves people who would reasonably be expected to have the people testing their hourglass expansion drug take off their clothes in advance of getting busted up. The permanent transformation drugs are very much a strokestory motif that feel out of place in this vaguely naturalistic setting. 

And that's not counting the confusion I had as to why the protagonist couldn't go into business for herself or go to work for a rival company. This isn't just underexplained, it's almost left entirely out of the assumptions of the story that this could be an option, and it feels like this is because the plot was created around the climax. 

The characters themselves feel a bit off. I'd be a dog in the manger if I were to say it's unrealistic for Paige to be interested in women and especially in enormous breasts and butts on those women, but I will say that Paige is only lowkey sapphic at best before she's called upon by the narrative to have some hot tittygrowth sex. It would be nice to have some more overt hints that she's into giant titties for reasons more personal than an academic interest in pursuing larger bustlines in advance of that happy moment when she expresses lust for gigaboobs.

Overall, though, the characters have hints of character, the plot progresses in a logical set of escalations and setbacks, and the breast expansion is fairly well luscious. So I rate it better than my review suggests I would be.