The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Specter09
Yuris Antiques 4: Magnetic Manaism
Shae is stuck in lockdown with her best friend Carly's boyfriend Nick. What's worse than Nick is that he's ranting and raving about some weird necklace he picked up at a store that lets him absorbed people's energy and change them. She can't wait for this lockdown to end. 
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Nick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Need a continuation, where maybe he gets even bigger by expanding his harem, or siphoning the male energy of other lesser men
Daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Glad to see you're still writing. Spectra's Mind is still a favorite.
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
These stories are always perfect. Great job.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well that was hot.   I think I got off on his muscle growth and general alphadom as much as the absurdly hot girls.
SomeGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hot!
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