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A late-night stargazing incident leads to a girl returning home with a demanding and fertile new surprise for her roommate.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.75
rushee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
really amazing descriptions. I can't wait for the next part, if there will be one. I wanna year all about how several girls getting bred and giving birth...hope to see some more
Chargerse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just wish it was longer.
Jman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I would say 5 stars if the story wasn't too short. The writing style, the sex, the detail was all great! I say go further
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Very appealing detail. But the story needs more depth. The characters have not completely lost their minds. Why were they transformed? What happens when they breed and give birth? It feels like the author has something in mind but didn't complete it. Go ahead...go there.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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