A struggling couple make amends over a breast milk business. Or do they? How far will Jessica let Faye's antics and promises take her despite her growing apprehension?
A BE and Lactation Novella
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 5.00
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
For a BE story this focuses a whole lot on deep character conflicts, but I'm not going to hold that against it!
alinktotheg
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While breast expansion description was def leaving many to their own imagination, I couldn't help but be enthralled by the quality of words and story telling concepts. This is diamond in this rough. I easily made up the BE sequences in my head to match the fleeting details. Too much exposure to the content over the years would allow me to ruin the masterpiece that is the rest of this story.
Flakers
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very enjoyable! Loved the cow stuff and their relationship! Looking forward to more for this author!
Red
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
As a story, OK, good. Very good idea a woman in the human cow business. Proper length, very good writing technically. Could and should have been so much better very little description, sketchy and poorly done. Very poor idea of how lactation and breast growth works, a lot of ridiculous and execrable sudden growth to beanbag chair size. Not recommended, should have been a lot better.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A fantastic story. I love your work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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