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A transgender test subject for a new hormone treatment finds herself growing far more than she'd expected as she vlogs her progress.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 5.00
Kyra
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Very good, love your work. Would like it a little longer, maybe a bit more character development.
Mingo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was exceptional. The way you structured it and the pacing were great. Will definitely read several more times
lurker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Damn, you don't see enough stories like these. I LOVE the girldick and balls expansion!
Chargerse67
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love your writing and am so happy to see more of it.
Torque
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You write the best stuff, seriously. The only critique is that I wish it was longer! The growth drawn out, her getting off, maybe a fan overdoses...
Keep it up!
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