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One woman searches to find happiness and companionship after an industrial accident creates an outbreak of bloating bosoms and mounting libidos in a small college town.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 5.00
Shura
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
My first comment here. I had to praise such a stupendous story, which goes right up my alley, even though the expansion descriptions had little detail.
TongueinTail
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was REALLY good and now I'm downloading your other stuff. It did get a little rapey for me by the end, but I'm just sensitive to that sort of thing
Interesting
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Such a great story. I've found myself thinking about from an artistic perspective, because the character development was so strong. If anything, the plot and character development was so good that it was almost distracting from the reason I downloaded it in the first place. I've read your other work before so I realize that longform is a strong suit of yours I just would've liked it more if you had spent more time on Casey's growth earlier in the story. Just my opinion. I'd give you a 6 on the nonBE categories if I could.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Holy. Fucking. Shit. Hot.
This is EXACTLY my kink. I have no complaints and only praise. In particular, I liked how there was a bit of a plot and tension with the small boob issue to build suspense.
I do have some mild suggestions to make it even hotter. I'd love to see a sequel from the perspective of the boyfriend and Reg or whatever the name of the final guy was.
WristThickDick
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic story, I love all of the mind break near the end, Only sad it ended so soon after everything was just getting crazy.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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