Already more buxom than she ever imagined, Joanna realizes that her house-guest's generosity is boundless, and if something doesn't change fast, her own measurements will be too!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Settler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really nice to read them once Thx a lot!
Rowc86
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
HappyClam911
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is absolutely amazing. The rate of growth, the plotline, the characters, the tension, the sex, and the dialogue are all stellar. Joanna is a very fun character to watch in her element here as she barks orders one moment and then weakens to lust in the next. Both main characters are quite intelligent and their dialogue and banter are great. The narration is superb. Reyna is very interesting,and feels very real and genuine for what she is. I also suspect there's more here than she's admitting or letting on. I can't wait for Part 3.
Jalopy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like this setup, and I'm interested in the aliens. I'm beginning to worry about Joanna's back, though, and hope she becomes like the alien physically rather than becoming immobile.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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