Good sisters can share anything, right? What about their bodies?
Explores expansion and attribute borrowing.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Kronk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story promises to be intriguing and the characters are very well set up. The different method of be and how you balance Halleys desire to be big with the problems and judgments that brings is very good too.
The only thing that takes me out of the story is that either nobody notices or nobody cares that these sister have widely varying busts from day to day.
JoCast
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I very, very much enjoy the narrative in this story and the BE was implemented in a way I'd not scene in awhile! Overall, I'd recommend everyone give this a read! Fantastic job and I'm looking forward to more from this series and the author!
TheNewNo2
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a really good story, and with a hook that I hadn't seen on here before. My one complaint is that there's a theme of ending a scene before orgasm, which is a bit annoying, but I loved it apart from that, and look forward to the rest.
clibretto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am LOVING this story so far! Technically, your writing is fantastic. The method of BE is novel and the characters all have depth and growth opportunities. I am very much looking forward to future installments.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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