The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
Closing Time, Part 4
In town for the day, Kelli is hungry for something from the Muffin Top, while Mara has an insatiable appetite for something that's likely to get both of them in trouble.
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Ellofri
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always a treat when you update! And what's this about Vicky getting incorporated into this canon??
Zan Zabar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Another excellent installment. Always look forward to your stories. I love the intensity of your expansion scenes.
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