The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nairny
The Big Trial
Tess arrives at an abandoned building to take part in a trial for a new pill. She had been promised that her desire to grow taller and taller would be fulfilled, but the pill has an unexpected extra effect.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Good writing and a very...satisfying story.
 Chuck
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Why I am the first to comment, I have no idea. The growth description and writing style were superb! Fives all the way!
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