belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
Super Short 750 word story for a competition over at Literotica. A young couple stumbles across a spell. Quick, hot and steamy, I hope you enjoy this little stand alone tapas bite.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.75
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Story was really good given 750 words. I'm not into huge cocks but your story had a feel like I have done it before so was pleasing me no large cock just fucked with her legs up. I saw one typo, so no 5 for technical. 4 for Characters because in 750 words...I loved the be Description made the growing happen by mentioning it several times. Overall is just an average of everything.
DB20
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really enjoying all the new content from you BB47!
Pik
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Considering the restrictions this is a very good piece. All your work is amazing and I always look forward to new pieces from you!
Tanap
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Felt it was excellent considering the restrictions. I would love to see an after contest expansion or maybe another story in the same universe.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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