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The Overflowing Bra

BB47
belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
The Commodity Part 3
We find ourselves back at the point where Mindy and John wake up.  But this time it's told from Mindy's point of view.  We also meet a new character (thank you Roid for the idea.)
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Pik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always an amazing source of enjoyment with your work. Cant wait for the next part and all the other things you have planned.
FlowSmash
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another great installment! Mindys slow succumbing to her lust was great, and Janice looks to be an interesting character. I cant wait for the next one, hopefully Mindy and Janice get bustier and John gets even studlier!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
1.  Thanks for helping out us needy perverts. Ha.  We're pretty demanding for a bunch of people asking for a favor!  You're a good egg.
2.  That was hot  and far more exciting and original than I could have imagined in my limited creativity.  Now I have to figure out how to walk out of my office without getting myself sued.
3.  I have no constructive comments for fear of screwing up what you have going on here. I do want to thank you for turning the man into a stud.  As if you couldn't figure out by my screenname, I'm a pretty extreme bodybuilder because how I feel about myself is probably 50 of sexual desire.  I love it when the man is not neglected in these scenarios for the same reason.
4.  Awesome!
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