belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
We find ourselves back at the point where Mindy and John wake up. But this time it's told from Mindy's point of view. We also meet a new character (thank you Roid for the idea.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Pik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always an amazing source of enjoyment with your work. Cant wait for the next part and all the other things you have planned.
FlowSmash
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another great installment! Mindys slow succumbing to her lust was great, and Janice looks to be an interesting character. I cant wait for the next one, hopefully Mindy and Janice get bustier and John gets even studlier!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
1. Thanks for helping out us needy perverts. Ha. We're pretty demanding for a bunch of people asking for a favor! You're a good egg.
2. That was hot and far more exciting and original than I could have imagined in my limited creativity. Now I have to figure out how to walk out of my office without getting myself sued.
3. I have no constructive comments for fear of screwing up what you have going on here. I do want to thank you for turning the man into a stud. As if you couldn't figure out by my screenname, I'm a pretty extreme bodybuilder because how I feel about myself is probably 50 of sexual desire. I love it when the man is not neglected in these scenarios for the same reason.
4. Awesome!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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