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In a world where status and nobility is judged by the size of your breasts and your raw sexual attraction, Faye was quite possibly the ugliest woman in NorthGlen, the "Outcast" mining Village south of Noblash. Resigned to a life of servitude to her sexually abusive husband, she never dreamed that her world would be turned upside-down by an evil curse cast on her village by a passing Red Sorceress.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.44
- BE: 4.11
- Characters: 4.22
- Technical: 4.44
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'm looking for a proofreader for Commodity Part 3, see my post in the Reddit Forum.
FlowSmash
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Its great to see you writing again! As Joe Bob said, I wouldve liked to see more of the growth onscreen, though your writing was very good, as per normal.
Are you still going to be continuing your other series, like STX and The Commodity?
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
If you want to read another story that takes place in this world Noblash, read my previous story called The Nymph.
Geek
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Phenomenal start, please keep building this world
CommodityFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful. Ive been waiting for more Commodity for years though, please continue it.
WildCards
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I'm keen to learn where this story goes, looking forward to part 2
Joe Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Welcome back, Bb47! The story was very hot, as per usual. I would've liked to have the male enhancements happen onstage, but reading about their usage was good enough for me.
Kind of offtopic, but I'd love to see The Commodity series continued if possible.
Viewerboy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this. The setting, theme, and of course the breasts and dick expansion! Please so keep going with it!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very interesting and hot. Not sure where this goes, but I'd take his curse.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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