April comes home to find her roommate struggling to contain her breasts as they expand. She says it is because of some chocolates that were left at the door. April gets jealous and makes herself expand too, but neither girl is prepared for just how potent the mystery chocolates are.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 3.83
- Characters: 3.17
- Technical: 3.17
S G deLaure
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Good setup, but then the story becomes quite messed up. Found it quite hard to follow the anatomical changes on the couch. Too erratic.
Guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
The setup isnt as interesting to me as something like Smashing Bust, but I still thought it was solid and I appreciate the contribution to the site.
Tbh, I think your strongest stuff is when you go into detail with the process and the expansion, since you have a very nice style for writing descriptively. Keep up the good work!
Duder
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed it, even though everyone else hated it haha. I like your hourglass stories, keep it up
Generic
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's quite a generic story. You can gueas what happens after reading 5 sentences.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I do think a little more description and realism in the reactions was warranted, but to disagree with the previous review, a B cup is actually quite small! Far less than a handful. It's only those who think a DD is headsized that also think B is large... when really, this is completely wrong.
aitchbee
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Mary, like April, had always been quite flatchested. April wore a B cup bra, and Mary wasnt much bigger. THIS DESCRIPTION IS FALSE!. A Bcup breast is averagesized and a Ccup breast is large. If you're going to use cupsizes, know what they mean!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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