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The Overflowing Bra

Closing Time, Part I
Kelli finally gets the chance to visit the Muffin Top the night before she and her husband move out of town.  But will one evening be enough for her to be satisfied?  And does he have any idea just how big his wife's ambitions are?
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
My only real complaint about your stories Kodos is that all your characters sound the same. Other than that, I very much enjoy them!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great ! 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As nice as the last once THX!
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