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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Goddess Hunt 3
Allison goes to rescue Paul and the three Japanese Pop-Stars that have been kidnapped alongside him. Meanwhile Iris gets to know the goddess of love and calls an old friend.
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 Petrifax
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Terrific series from one of the best currently active writers on the site.
 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Agreed with other comment  great to get more from my favourite writer on this site! Y
 Nightbluemage
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I'm glad to see another chapter of this series, keep them coming!
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