When Kimmy gets jealous of a work colleague and the size of her bust, she tries to find a way to make her breasts bigger by looking on the internet. She finds a strange way to do it that leaves her in a tricky situation.
The main focus is on detailed expansion and clothing destruction.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 3.67
NightAkula
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please fix format, cannot be opened on mobile!! Or upload a txt version
CheshireKat
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The only critique I have is that the size comparison is a little inconstant. Provided it can be difficult to have a easy, consistent means of visually expressing size comparison the reader can identify with.
Beau
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nice, a marked improvement
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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