A story that focuses on in depth expansion description. A woman is working at an archaeological dig site when she finds a fertility statue. She keeps it for herself, which results in some welcome changes.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 5.00
guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thosebewbstho
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Delightful story. Cries out for a sequel about how the others received ber new body.
Faves0
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your style is perfect! Hope you will do more of these.
Workerkeeper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice differences in describing the size changes. I like how was building. Keep it up.
xyz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great descriptions, Looking forward to more. One thing would be to include more file formats. For example, .txt works better on mobile.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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