The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Goddess Hunt 1
In this sequel to Paul's Problems Paul and Allison take a trip to Japan, but first Paul has to talk with Veronica about the fate of the world and how his penis can help.
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 Majmage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great series thanks so much for your writing!
 I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Imaginative, engaging, and er... provoking... as usual!
 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I love this series. I love all your work! I will never stop reading if you carry on writing, so please continue! With this and your other stories 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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