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The Overflowing Bra

Merkava IV
Saint, Sinner, Succubus Chapter VII
Chapter 7 of Saint, Sinner, Succubus.

In this installment, we immediately follow up the events that ended chapter six, along with the introduction of some major players on the side of evil, then there's a mile high club induction, complete with some clothes bursting, and finally, the reemergence of Angela. 
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Im just here looking for the negative comments from liddle.   Its almost as if the author, Merkava, had an affair with some side chick liddle with big boobs and then left her and went back to his wife who is flat.  But liddle knows about his writing, and his fetish, and this site.  And theres nothing like a woman scorned, so shes leaving negative comments and trolling and hoping things go to shit with his wife.  lol.  Good stuff!  
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Since it's been a week, without comments, and the download count has been pretty low for this author based on past performance, I'll just say this

I really, really HATE the PDF format. Not a big fan of DRM generally, or Adobe in particular.

Despite the PDF, I enjoyed this story up through part 5, but like many others have noted, part 6 was not easily or at all available on the 'free' site. I was unable to get anymore than the excerpt provided in the download.

And now comes part 7, with a note about the events that ended part 6 which manymost? of us couldn't read. Very disappointing.

Can you at least make the full part 6 available?
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am REALLY loving this series, and cannot wait for the rest of it to come out! I am really loving the relationship between Matt and Natalie, and loving her struggle to be good and the challenges she has to go through
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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