An ugly nerdy girl finds herself befriending the highschool hunk. He's way too handsome and she's way too ugly for anything to happen.
Right?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.00
nikochan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nice first contribution. good writing skills. Hope to read more of your work.
Lily Bunny
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Not a very satisfying story. Unlikable characters, very plain BE and transformation discription, and over all just not sexy. The writing itself was fine, no major grammar or spelling issues, but I just hated every character in this story and was not invested in anything that was happening.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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