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Brooke, an insecure, emotionally needy and recently dumped woman, has been invited to a pool party by her ex's girlfriend who also happens to be her grade school nemesis. Brooke is going to the party, but not without the help of some magic beanstalk seeds, courtesy of her best friend, Fern.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.33
SomeGuy
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One or two slightly awkward sentences and technical goofs here and there Corolla wasn't capitalized, for instance but this was a really good story with believable characters who acted and sounded like people, good descriptions that didn't rely on cringey porno slang, and a plot that was simple but held together well. Very glad I found this.
codexdrinker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A solid story with characters who felt well thought out and an interesting premise. Keep up the good work!
Clovis
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A nice story. The characters were all enjoyable not just the main characters and I liked how the story progressed. Very much wanted it to continue past the ending. Good work!
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